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The Fog by Jassy2012

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This is a wonderful piece, no doubt about it. The only thing I would "fix" is where her hair comes from her head in the middle (the part in the hair) just seems like there's a glow on her face in general... but I feel that would tone that down a bit.

I, personally, would like to see a bit more detail in the feline creature.

I have nothing else to add, but there is a 100 word minimum so i'm going to just keep typing until I reach, or surpass, it.
So, yeah.

Five, Four, Three, Two, One, Goodbye.
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Jassy2012 Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Hi
thanks for your critique
I tinker about 2 hours only for her hair - and I want it such as it is
with the ligt glow

white and black together

what detail in creature did you mean???

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:iconshadowknight427:
It looks like there's a bobcat (or some feline creature) in the bottom left corner ... ?
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Jassy2012 Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
ahhhhhhhhhh
it`s a black panther
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:iconshadowknight427:
Yeah, that! haha
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Jassy2012 Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
:hug:sssssssssssss
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Jassy2012 Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
:hug:ssssssssss
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